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As for suggestions for improvement, I will just give you some technical stuff. I would like to see cleaner lines. Right now, your lines are fuzzy...Yes they are dark...but it's not one straight line. I want flowing lines. Then, with the winking eye, the line should be thicker since both the top eyelashes as well as the lower ones are meeting together = twice the thickness.
That's about it. Keep drawing!
I like the pose, and Ukraine's boobs are the right size (not too small lol)
I love the eye. It looks very good and I adore the shading/colouring in the eye. (Again, much better than I could do!)
The only criticism I could give to this is the hair. I like how you gave it light spots, but mabye next time you could give it more shape?
All in all I loved this piece and you oviously worked very, very hard on it. Well done!
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